In the Navy by Captain Jack.  Not his best song, but eh, whatever.

Okay okay okay.  This entire journal is just for me to let you know that the prologue of my latest prijest(Still untitled) is finite.  Which means you can expect it soon.  I think it's pretty good, but eh, I'll let you guys be the judge of that.  

Oh, Also, the first chapter should be done soon.



Oh, and one more thing: CHARACTERS!!!!

I havae so many fucking characters, it's not even funny.  Why am I telling you this? So I can have some critique, that's why.  I'll give you details of major character(omitting the imortant facts that will be revealed in story) , so you guys can be all like, "Zomg, Don, that's pretty fucking cliche'" And I can be all like, "Stfu, It's not cliche'!" but then go back and change it.  I would appreciate that ALOT.

Since I'm here...I guess I can go ahead and give you the details of one such characters.  Or, actually, characters.  Ok, it's an organization, but who cares? NO one, that's who.  So...without further ado....ladies and gentlemen, I give to you:

                             The BONESMEN!!!
Mwahaha.

Bonesmen: The bonesmen are a grooup of 'secret police' who believe themselves to be above the law, both of men and Gods.  They do what they deem appropriate.  While the origianl Bonesmen started out with good intentions, they soon became corrput thanks to the power they recieved once donning the Bonesmen black suits.  Modern day Bonesmen consider themselves judge, jury, and exucutioner all in one, and are quick to exert that power.

They are bad guys.

Appearance:  Upon becoming a Bonesman(and yes, even the women are called BonesMEN) the trainee dyes his hair white, to signify, you guessed it, bones.  Bonesmen always wear black, even when not on official buisness.  Official bonesmen attire consists of fitted black suits, 3/4 length coats, black slacks, and the Bonesmen insignia upon their backs( a white raven sitting atop a skull).  

Random Bonesmen Like things:  Bonesmen are given a 'soul mate' (though not always sexual) Upon initiation, with whom they connect with on a spiritual level.  THey are able of limited telekinesis with each other, like advanced ESP(n...lol). When one Bonesmen dies, so does his soul mate.  Ouch.  Bonesmen's weapons always have some sort of, well, bone integrated into it, but it's only because traditions requires it to.  Bonesmen lose their real namea upon becoming Bonesmen, and don the name of a moon.  (i.e., Ganymede, Neptune, callypso).  Bonesmen are also enchanted upon becoming bonesmen, which gives them strength and speed.

You don't come to the bones men; they come to you.

And...that's all.

Comment!!
Adieu

Don

""Here is a list of fearful things; the fin of a shark,
A vultures wings.
The bite of the rabid dogs of war,
The Voice of one who went before.
But most of all, the mirror's gaze
Which counts out our numbered days.""

Abarat, Clive Barker